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Thursday, February 2, 2012

                              WRITING TIPS 
                 FREE WRITES  - FRAN  LEWIS


Free Writes are great to start the juices going. When you start to right a novel, short story or just a blog start writing and keep going. Do not worry about grammar, spelling or anything specific writing skill while doing a free write. As an educator who worked with students who had difficulties writing I wanted to encourage them to just put their thoughts on paper, not tell them how long the piece had to be and praise them for their efforts. This was a positive tool to encourage reluctant writers. When an author or writer feels that too many negative audiences it does get discouraging and often disheartening receive his/her writing. When a piece is completed you need to step away from it and come back to it at later time to see where you want to go with it, begin adding or changing adjectives, deciding on the characters, the plot and or the mood. But, only one element of the plot at a time should be focused on. I found that when teaching students to write short stories and understanding the elements of a novel it was easier to teach plot, mood, character development and the rest one focused area at a time. I would often have them as you can do as writers create your character first or your setting. I found when writing Faces Behind the Stones I had to decide where the story would take place and how I would present the voices of each character even before writing each story. I decided on the 7 stories based on real life events and began writing the first one. Of course, nothing is ever really done. Each piece of writing even after it is published can be improved on. Writing is an on going and exciting process that stimulates the mind and really gets those juices flowing. When writing is received in a negative fashion you need to look long and hard at what the person is saying. If their ideas or criticism is positive and relates to how you can create a stronger plot line, middle section or keeping the reader focused that is great. If the person attacks your message or your thoughts and says they are copied from another author they better be able to prove it. With so many authors ideas will inadvertently overlap with another story. Most of the time you have not even read or our aware of this other author’s writing. So: Keep writing. Get those thoughts down and never ever get discouraged. Your ideas and thoughts are your own and whether everyone likes or dislikes them does not matter. What does matter is that you continue to write.


                                                     Author - George Lasher 

A Writing tip - Author - George Lasher 

Avoid using the word, was, whenever possible. Was is a weak verb of being that avoids detail rather than providing readers with additional description that might help them feel more connected to the characters.
 
The sentence, Bob said he was sick, is not nearly as descriptive as Bob claimed he might throw up at any moment.
 

 
George R. Lasher
 
 

Wednesday, February 1, 2012


Breathing Life
Author Joann Buchanan 

                                    How do you breathe life into your work?

The question seems simple enough. It's even phrased in such a manner so that a person who doesn't write can understand it. The answer though is much more difficult. Breathing life creates a reality the reader can sink his teeth into. It's the difference between the phrases, "Dam I couldn't put this down," and "Oh man that sucked. What a waste of money."


The following is an example of what I like to consider breathing life into a story. Though both will have the same basics, they will be completely different. One will be a generic sense of what a character is and the other will, if I do this right, make you picture the actual character. He will live and breathe to you; the reader.

John drove his truck to the stop sign and parked it. After a few moments, he climbed out and walked to the back to take a piss. Good thing the road was in the middle of nowhere.

Ok, as you can see in the above couple of sentences, we have a character who has to take a piss. Not very gracious I know, but it will prove a point.  We also know he's driving a truck in the middle of nowhere. Sounds simple. The picture is painted in the fewest words possible, but it doesn't really bring life to the character.

Now, here is the same scenario with a little life breathed into it.

Unbearable summer heat beat down on the roof of the old beat up dodge pickup truck John used for work. Streaks of sweat raced down his face created small streams of clean skin. It wasn't the heat that caused him to shift from side to side. It was his full bladder from all the Dr. Peppers he drank earlier in the day.

The middle of nowhere wasn't always a bad thing. The stop signs put there can even be an annoyance and for the most part, John generally ran them. Not this time though. He had to take a piss so bad, his bladder felt like a million pop rocks exploded at once. John stepped out of the truck and looked around at the endless fields. There wasn't a soul in sight for miles. He walked to the back of the truck, unzipped his pants and thought, 'Dam am I ever glad I'm not a woman right now."

Sweet relief filtered through his body when the flowing golden stream of liquid hit the ground. It made a distinct sound, the way a hose does when you turn it on to a trickle. When he finished, John let out a medium sigh of relief and said, "When ya gotta go, ya gotta go."

With his body relieved of the exploding pop rocks, he climbed back in his truck and took another swig of Dr. Pepper.

As you can see in this one, the picture is really painted. You know the man has to go so bad it doesn't matter where he is. Though the subject matter isn't one of great grace, however,  it is a picture we can all relate to. We have all had to go to the bathroom and been in the middle of no where. That is the point. If I have done my job right, you-the reader, will say to yourself 'I know how that feels.' There in rests the breath of life. When you as a writer paint a picture and a scene the reader can relate to, then you have brought life. Breathing life is as simple as taking a piss and explaining all the details.

I know that sounds bad and is more often then not easier said than done. Try this on for size. When you're creating a scene you don't feel has any life to it, back away from the computer. Turn on a stop watch and write as fast as you can for five minutes. Don't worry about periods, commas or any other punctuations.  This is a tip I learned from Jack Remick. I can't remember where he said he learned it, but I can tell you it works. Once you let all the pretenses go, your mind is free to let the soul speak.

In the end, that is what writing a story is all about. Don't be afraid to push the boundaries or even worry what others will think. Write from the soul, paint a believable picture with a character that is real in your own mind. The monsters are real because you say so. True love exists because you believe it and you carry the fates of destiny in your fingers. Breathing life is simply knowing all of that.

I hope this helps and maybe inspires. Remember above all else entertain and make it work.

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I had an idea to ask writers to submit some of their writing techniques- so frequently I will add this to my blog. I really hope it helps and if it does help even in some small way please e- mail me and I will post it.

Good luck to all my writing friends!

A  GOOD STORY IS  GOOD STORY 
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Monday, January 30, 2012

A GOOD STORY IS A GOOD STORY - HOST MARSHA COOK


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Please join  Marsha Cook Tuesday January 31 at 9  PM-EST, 8PM CST- 7PM MT - 6 PM- PST  for an entertaining and informative discussion on writing screenplays and books. The very special guest for the evening is Jack Remick. Jack  co-authored The Weekend Novelist Writes a Mystery, with Robert J. Ray. He has a collection of short fiction, Terminal Weird (Black Heron Press), a novel, The Stolen House (Pig Iron Press) as well as work in The Seattle Five Plus One, an anthology (Pig Iron Press). Jack’s stories and poems have appeared in national magazines such as Carolina Quarterly, Portland Review, Big Hammer, Café Noir Review, and Northwind. Jack is also a frequent guest on Shark Radio with host Joann Buchanan-


You won't want to miss this show! You can check out  Jack's books at 
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A GOOD STORY IS A GOOD STORY - HOST MARSHA COOK


Please join  Marsha Cook Tuesday January 31 at 9  PM-EST, 8PM CST- 7PM MT - 6 PM- PST  for an entertaining and informative discussion on writing screenplays and books. The very special guest for the evening is Jack Remick. Jack  co-authored The Weekend Novelist Writes a Mystery, with Robert J. Ray. He has a collection of short fiction, Terminal Weird (Black Heron Press), a novel, The Stolen House (Pig Iron Press) as well as work in The Seattle Five Plus One, an anthology (Pig Iron Press). Jack’s stories and poems have appeared in national magazines such as Carolina Quarterly, Portland Review, Big Hammer, Café Noir Review, and Northwind. You won't want to miss this show! You can check out all his books at  http://www.amazon.com/Jack-Remick/e/B001IOBPOW
More info on the shows at www.michiganavenuemedia.com